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Spencer Parkinson

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I found a story of mine again from years ago and its about Hogwarts New Zealand. I decided to post here because I need your reviews whether it is too cheesy and I need to change the story line on the other chapter. It is not finish yet, so, my mind can change on chapter 3 of the story.

Disclaimer: Hogwarts New Zealand is not mine, I don't own it :)

C H A P T E R O N E : Keeping it to herself
The best thing about having an internet is chatting with your friends, reading fan fiction and most of all … role playing with the other Harry Potter addicted peoples. That’s what Alex, Lian, Chad, Mitchie and Elly was doing before the mystery letters came at their front doors.

Alex was the funniest, sometimes evil and straight to the point person. Which is the other way around of her brother Chad, Chad has a funny side but serious on his school works. Lian on the other hand is a preppy, music lover and brave most of all the time; best friend of our heroine Alex. Mitchie and Elly are twins with the same attitudes; but not on picking clothes. The twins are the two riches in the group but shy on new people.

*Real Story*

Alex took a peek at Chad’s room which is just across from her room. She knocked first and went inside.
“Can I have the mouse please?” She asked Chad politely and even smiled.
The best thing about Chad is that he always gives what her sister wants from him but not this time.
“You can get it later, I’m still replying on my threads.” Chad told her while typing loudly.
Alex’s nose flared, she then click the power button of Chad’s laptop and starred at him. Chad didn’t say anything and unplugged the mouse cable off of his laptop.
“Happy now?” He asked scowling and handed the mouse to her.
She nodded and smiles sweetly; she then walked out of Chad’s room and was going to her room when the door bell rang. Alex and Chad’s parents are at work, so, no one will answer it down stairs. She sigh as she went down and toward the door, there Alex saw two letters in the floor.
“Does when I got a letter like this?” She asked herself loudly after picking up the letter in the ground.
Going back up stairs at her room, her telephone rang and was lined to Lian. Alex picked it up while examining the two letters that was address to her and her brother.
“Lian?” Alex spoke at the receiver.
“You won’t believe what just I got…” The person in the other line said excitedly.
“A letter with a freaky seal in front? ... I know... I and Chad just got one. But Chad still doesn’t know, still busy role playing.” Alex glared at his brother’s back, thinking if she’s every going to tell him.
“Are we going? I mean this is our groups dream … to be in Hogwarts and be like any students there.”
“But it’s in New Zealand; I thought it’s in Scotland.”
“Maybe Hogwarts has a branch there and we are redirected there.”
“Okay, I’ll call you later, if I got a clear mind. Bye.” Alex hang-up and place the telephone on her table.
She turned on her laptop and plugged the mouse. While waiting for the screen to pop-up, she opened her letter and read it of her to understand why Hogwarts has to choose them. But the answers weren’t there; Alex placed the letters at her desk beside the laptop. Rummaging at her inbox, she got one message from Mitchie and Elly, her friend twins. They too have received a letter from Hogwarts. The dream that she felt is getting real now, what’s her parent got to say that she and her brother are accepted to a mythology school?

Alex was bothered by the time dinner was set. Chad is watching TV with Alex while their parents are preparing their dinner. Set at Alex’s sweater pocket was the two letters from Hogwarts, clutching it tightly.
“Kids, dinners ready.” Called out Mary, Alex and Chad’s mother.
The two teenagers stood up from the couch and walked straight to their dinner table, it was a quiet one that’s what Alex was waiting for. Alex placed back her spoon on her plate and took out the two letters from her sweater pocket.
“Mom and Dad … Could you explain this to us?” She said placing the letters beside her Dad’s plate.
John looked at it nervously and put back his spoon on his plate; he took a sip at his water first and cleared his throat.
“This letter is a letter …” John trailed off.
“I know it’s a letter Dad … But why is the senders address is from Hogwarts? That doesn’t mean that Hogwarts exists, Dad, its only fictional.” Alex explained.
“Honey, what your Dad is telling you, is that …” Mary spoke and trailed off.
“Hogwarts is real and we studied there.” Her Dad told her and it shocked her.
“Woah! you mean Hogwarts New Zealand is real? … Is that the branch of Hogwarts Scotland?” Asked Chad, who butt in.
Their parents only nod once, the whole dinner was in a great silence. It was the worst Harry Potter day ever for Alex, Chad on the other had was very excited of their flight to Hogwarts New Zealand. It can’t be happening, plus them a pure blood … What’s wrong with the world?
C H A P T E R T W O: There is trouble somewhere
The next day was as awful as the other day; they were packing to be in New Zealand. Yes, Alex wants to be in Hogwarts but not like this, this shouldn’t happen to her and her friends. She sigh as she packed all her clothes and some things she might need at Hogwarts, she knew she didn’t needed her laptop cause electronics can’t be together with magic, it might just blew up the entire Wizarding world. Plus, there is no electricity at Hogwarts. Today was the day of their flight to New Zealand and she will miss terribly her parents. Exiting her room, she took one last look at it; well her and his brother will go back every holidays, it isn’t bad at all.

“Come on guys, you’ll be late for your flight.” John called from the garage.
The two wet down together, Alex and Chad smiled together and happily went outside at their car. When inside her mother burst out all her water in the eye. Mary turned to us at the back sit of the car.
“You two behave yourself; I don’t want Headmistress Rambolt to expel you two.” She said still sobbing.

“We understand mom and don’t worry I’ll keep an eye on Chad.” Alex told her mom and smirked while turning her gaze at Chad.

“Like I’ll be doing something ... Maybe you will, not me.” Chad narrowed his eyes to her.

“Okay, you just look freaky narrowing your eyes. You’re hideous.” Alex made a face at him.

Then they made their little journey at airport where goodbyes started, all of them are there; Lian, Mitchie and Elly. All of their friends are there, their parents supporting at them. It wants so bad after all that they are all going at Hogwarts New Zealand, but just a big challenge for them to make new friends again. The flight was as remarkable as always, their group was the loudest as always. Looking at her window, she smiled slightly this has got to be the happiest school year or I’ll drop myself off Alex sarcastically thought and was distracted by her brother who lean on her shoulder to sleep. She too lean her head at his head and took a deep sleep.

“Alex, where here.” A voice softly told her to her ears.
She awoke with a start and saw the night light of New Zealand; she smiled as she saw it. It was as beautiful as Las Vegas; the light is soft and gets your eyes warmth from it. The plane landed at the grounds and they were out in no time, waiting at the lobby for their baggages.

“Yes! Cell phone working.” Chad punched in the air.

“Are you nuts? … This is still the Muggle world. You are so dumb.”Exclaimed Lian who was reading an airport magazine.
Alex and the twins rolled their eyes, after a couple of minutes. They took their baggage and went off outside just to see a bizarre happenings; hooded, masked and robe people where attacking innocent people.

“What’s wrong with them?” Alex asked.
It was then that she took a glance at the group of murderers weapon; a stick what’s wrong with this people holding … wait, that’s a … NO WAY she thought.

“THEY ARE DEATH EATERS! RUN!” Alex shouted at them
It was then that someone has snatched her, Alex wanted to get off of the arms holding her waist but it was nothing. She saw people holding her friends and brother too, it was then a moment, it started to spin really fast it makes her sick. When she touched the ground, it turns out that she wanted to vomit all over.
“What just freaking happen?” Asked Elly.
“You where attacked of course.” Told a voice from Alex’s back which its arms are still around her waist.
Alex tried to turn around and it was a success, a browned haired boy with deep emerald eyes was looking at her directly into her eyes.
“I’m sorry … but who are you?” She asked completely not shuttering. “And your arms are still on my waist.” Alex smiled weakly.
The guy then placed his arms on his side and was about to spoke when he was cut off with someone.
“We are from Hogwarts New Zealand. We are supposed to be there when the time your plane landed, but it happens that the death eaters went there first.” The British accent voice told them.
Alex and the others turned to face a man whose hair is curled up like the guy on a Korean hit tv show boys over flowers. Weird thought Chad, Chad looked seriously at the man to have spoken to them about New Zealand and they are supposed to escort them.
“Don’t worry, it happens all the time.” Chad explained, fine with what happened.
“But why are the death eaters wants use? … Does are parents didn’t told us any particular happenings?” Elly asked from behind them, a boy about her age was also behind her.
“And who are you guys?” Asked Mitchie whose arms are folded across from her chest.
 

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