Eden Silverback
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Eden Luna
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((I'd work on the RP and diary entry if I were you. I couldn't quite understand what you were saying in your RP...no offence. Check here. Also, 5'4" is extremely tall for an eleven year old.))
Anyway, here are some questions for your character. I hope you don't mind!:
Whereabouts in New Zealand do you live?
Monov is an interesting name. Is there a story behind this name?
Any other reason you would become a cat if you were an Animagus?
What house do you think you would be in at Hogwarts?
Anyway, here are some questions for your character. I hope you don't mind!:
Whereabouts in New Zealand do you live?
Monov is an interesting name. Is there a story behind this name?
Any other reason you would become a cat if you were an Animagus?
What house do you think you would be in at Hogwarts?
Eden Silverback
Well-Known Member
- Messages
- 7,870
- OOC First Name
- Eden
- Wand
- Rosewood Wand 14 1/4" Essence of Hair from the mane of a Unicorn
...
- Messages
- 11,820
- OOC First Name
- Camilla
- Blood Status
- Half Blood
- Relationship Status
- Divorced
- Sexual Orientation
- Straight
- Wand
- Rosewood Wand 14 1/4" Essence Of Hair From The Mane Of A Unicorn
- Age
- 48
Getting better! I'm just going to be picky and say check your spelling and grammar...and maybe work a little more on your RPs. Just a tip, RPs are meant to be written in past, not present tense, so what you've written should look a little more like this:
Of course, that's just a start. Like I said, check what Athene wrote in this forum about Roleplay Hints and stuff.
I don't mean to be picky, I'm just trying to help!
Of course, that's just a start. Like I said, check what Athene wrote in this forum about Roleplay Hints and stuff.
I don't mean to be picky, I'm just trying to help!