This was a story I started on Sunday night, and finished up what I have so far last night. Hopefully I can extend more on what I have so far. But I think I need to put more description in to get that grasping feeling.
Any ideas or comments would be great, especially regarding on what I could do...
I think the theme could be tweaked in some areas. *wink wink nudge nudge Nick*
Also, I can't see a difference between the default theme and Small Screens theme?
"Alright then, see ya Thomas!" Justin yelled out, "Let's go!"
Justin began to walk over to the Borely Mansion...
(( Continued here http://hogwartsnewzealand.com/topic/7085073/1/ ))
((No not currently D:))
"I was only on the ledge for not even two seconds, I stood on the ledge, slipped and barely grabbed on with my hands, but my grip wasn't tight enough to hold on," he explained.
Name: Justin Johanson
House and Year: Gryffindor -- 1st Year
Relationship: Average Friends
What you think of Payton: A very odd girl, but great to talk to, different from all the other Slytherins, and she loves to laugh obviously. :P
Justin laughed, "Yeah, with the spiders, they are my worst fear, and of course, inside the mansion there are boggarts, and it was odd, the door slammed shut on us, and the only way out was the window."
"My first experience wasn't too good, you see, I have arachnophobia, and there is so many spiders there, but it was pretty good," said Justin, as he added on, "I'd like to go again though."
"Yeah, I have," Justin replied, "In fact that's pretty much where I came from before I bumped into Thomas, the doors closed on us and we had to jump out the windows, awesome fun."
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