My song

[Alexander Fields]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECDnmHccTHE


I just want to see what people think about my song, I know it isn't really that good, all feedback will be appreciated.

 

[Aurora Merrythought]

I think it's good. I don't really like songs with swear words in them however. I find them derogatory and unneed. But it sounds quite different. :]

 

[Alexander Fields]

i know i thought the swearing was over the top meself