Dan Adams.

Dan Adams

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The Basics.
Full name: Dan Joshua Adams.

Birthday: 28th April 2009.

Current age: 16.

Favorite subject: Potions.

Worst subject: Every other one but potions.

Educated At: Hogwarts Scotland, transferred to Hogwarts New Zealand.

House: Gryffindor.

Place of birth: Scotland.

Current living place: New Zealand.


Appearance.
Hair: Quite tall, dark skinned, very short black hair.

Eye’s: Brown.

Height: 5ft 6.



Personality.
He'll be friendly and rather flirty towards girls if they treat him right, and is known to be a bit of a charmer. He's not so keen on boys, and is usually a bit harsh towards them to start with, and will continue to be if he is treated the wrong way.



History.

Childhood.
Dan is from a half muggle, half magical family. From the moment Dan was born, his parents didn't want him. His dad beat him until he was 5, when his parents threw him out on the streets. He was homeless for 5 Years, and in that time, he was taken in, by a gang of adult thieves, who took care of him the best they could, on the streets, but they were tough on him, and were a violent group. When Dan was 10, he was found by his older female cousin and her boyfriend, who are both 10 Years older than him. They have parented him ever since, but Dan is still settling down, and is growing up a rough young lad.

Now.
Dan is now in his mid-teens, and is nothing but a trouble maker. Although, when he's with the right girl, he is known to be a bit of a charmer. He doesn't tend to get along with boys, after his dad beat him when he was younger, and the homeless gang were violent towards him. But he gets along with Dean, his cousins boyfriend. And is beginning to learn how to get along with people, but it has taken him 5 Years, and he is learning everyday.


Family.
Mother: Trish Adams.
Father: Joshua's Adams.
Other Family: Female Cousin. - Jess Adams. And her boyfriend - Dean Warlakers.
Step Brother: Troy Adams, who Dan is yet to meet. Troy is Joshua's son from hsi first marriage.
 
Good afternoon Dan and welcome to the site if your new, My name is Brian and I'll be your Character Development Reviewer today!

Just a few questions!

He's not so keen on boys, and is usually a bit harsh towards them to start with

Why doesn't he like guys?
Is there a particular memory or reason that he doesn't usually get along with them?
He's been at school for quite a while I'm sure he's met someone that could be a friend towards him that's a guy and if not why?

From the moment Dan was born, his parents didn't want him.

Why didn't his parents want him?
Did they not want kids and if they didn't why didn't they put him up for adoption?
What finally prompted his parents to throw him out?

he was found by his older female cousin and her boyfriend

Perhaps you can enlighten a bit more on the four W's, who what when where and how, how well did she know her cousin and how well their parents knew each other. Did they know you were beaten or that you were kicked out?
 
He's not so keen on boys, and is usually a bit harsh towards them to start with

Why doesn't he like guys? He doesn't like guys because his dad always used to beat him when he was younger, and the gang of adult thieves who were male, and were a tough bunch, and Dan doesn't want to end up back where he came from.

He's been at school for quite a while I'm sure he's met someone that could be a friend towards him that's a guy and if not why?
He tries to make friends that are male, but Dan is a rough guy, and isn't too good at making friends, even though he tries.

From the moment Dan was born, his parents didn't want him.

Why didn't his parents want him? Dan's dad had another son, Troy (who Dan doesnt yet know about.) from his first marriage, and never really wanted kids in his second marriage, and Trish (his current wife.) agrees with him on that.
What finally prompted his parents to throw him out?
They threw Dan out because, Troy, who was living with his mum, contacted his dad, and wanted to come and live with him. Dan's parents didn't want him anyway, so when they had the oppurtunity they threw him out.

he was found by his older female cousin and her boyfriend

Perhaps you can enlighten a bit more on the four W's, who what when where and how, how well did she know her cousin and how well their parents knew each other. Did they know you were beaten or that you were kicked out?


Who- Older cousin - Jess Adams and her boyfriend Dean Warlakers.
What- I dont know.
When- When Dan was 10 Years of Age.
Where- The streets of Scotland/Glasgow.
How- Dan had met his cousin a number of times in his early childhood, it took a year or so for his cousin to convince him that she actually was his cousin.
Jess Adams is Dan's dads sisters daughter...So they knew each other.
Dan took a few months to build a trustworthy relationship with Dean (Jess' Boyfriend.) but now he trusts him.
Dan was accepted into Jess and Dean's home, they found him on the streets, so they knew something wasn't right, after a year or so, Dan explained everything. Jess and Dean don't know of Troy, (Dan's dads son.) either.
 

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